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A lonely soul trapped in a body
It ash to fly to a heavenly sight
Why is that?
I will tell you why........




Years ago this pure soul was chosen to live as human; the poor little soul was so naive.
It believes human life would be simple and heavenly.
The pure soul begins its life as human male chosen by his people to guide them to the victory.
The poor naive soul though this was a simple and noble task for he should lead them to the right path.
He lead his people to the battle and for the first time he found himself doubting, he doubt his choice for being human as he look at his people slaying and killing their own brothers.
He stop there and wonder, is that what humans do? killing each other, shedding their own blood for power.
Children, women, men were killed in cold blood ,no one was spared.
And who led to their death?
It was the soul.



Weep no more you lonely soul
For your choice was disastrous
But fear no more for you are forgiven
After all curiosity killed the men
This is the first short story/poem kinda thing I have ever did , so please tell me your opinion.:iconomgomgemoteplz:


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ArtBYbeverly Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very spiritual and emotive, well done Cecy!
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Thank you so much bev!:huggle:
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ArtBYbeverly Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My pleasure hon...I'm sorry I've been so busy, I will visit again soon hon :huggle:
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
There is no need to apologize at all Bev :no: Thanks for the lovely visit :huggle:
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ArtBYbeverly Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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Joe-Maccer Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
I like it. Good thoughts Cecy. :clap:
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Thank you Joe :iconbowplz:
And thanks for the favorite :iconflowerrainplz:
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Joe-Maccer Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
My pleasure, Cecy. :iconspreadmoreloveplz:
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
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